User talk:Alex822

Welcome Alex822
21:34, January 14, 2016 (UTC)

13:14, January 15, 2016 (UTC)

Hobbies
Good information to add, but always remember to use references for this sort of thing, not just link to the SBS in question. That's how we do references here, and it does look better than just a bluetext link.

11:31, July 11, 2016 (UTC)

Ippon-Matsu feedback
Hey Alex. Nice work on Ippon-Matsu's page! I wanted to give you a little feedback after I saw your first edit summary. Here's what I've got:

The "Relationships" section is very solid. I think it is concise and well-written. I think the writing quality of the "History" section is also good. However, you summarize a lot of the dialogue, which is something we try to avoid doing too much of on this wiki. For longer pages, that would more than double characters' history sections. Take a close look at how Fliu trimmed down your work, and aim for a similar style. If you cut down on the dialogue summarizing, you will be set to keep doing this kind of work.

I am super glad to see someone else going back and giving older pages a boost. Keep up the good work, and feel free to reach out if you ever want advice or anything. 04:09, December 1, 2017 (UTC)