User blog comment:DarkSkullPirates/More Than Alone/@comment-4754162-20120730060932

Hey, I like this! A background on the person who everyone loves to hate. A few things:

A good one, DSP!
 * I don't mean to be a grammar police (I am no Rici! ^_^ YOHOHOHOOO!!!) but there are times when I lost in the confusion due to typo, like "as my father chased by mother" I think you meant "my" here and "but he looked over to be" I think you meant "me" here. If you improved on the typos, the story could be read more fluently.
 * Argh! I thought BB's flintlock pistol originated from this story, but sadly it was not T^T
 * It explained how he got to know of DF and how he started off to be a pirate (under WB)
 * Deep down, its not that he's evil, he's "just alone"... With that we can connect more to the character (if you have been watching Chris Nolan's Batman movies, I think you have been inspired by his way of storytelling)