User blog:Monkey d strawhat/Pirate Bay

Monkey D StrawHat here and this will be my first attempt at a prediction so some constructive criticism would be highly appreciated. Oh and this is an arc prediction not a chapter prediction.

New arc: Pirate Bay
 * Marine HQ in the New World


 * Marine: Fleet Admiral Akainu the situation with pirate Bay has gotten out of hand
 * Akainu: What do you mean
 * Marine: I mean the Pirate Tortuga incharge of Pirate Bay has captured the 2 islands surrounding Pirate Bay
 * Akainu: So it is normal for a pirate to try and expand their territory
 * Marine: But he has blocked Marine ships from getting anywhere near those islands, also it seems that he is looting marine ships and selling the weapons and amunition to pirates
 * Akainu; Tch that Pirate scum why did he decide to move all of a sudden


 * On the seas of The New world
 * Zoro: Oi this is the last of them you done up there Luffy
 * Luffy: Yea but why are there so many pirates here and why did they attack us are they idiots?
 * Sanji: Marimo i got about 200 here what about you
 * Zoro: 220 nosebleed kun
 * Sanji: Shitty swordsman
 * Luffy: (holding a pirate by the throat) Where do yo keep the meat on this ship
 * pirate: In the kitchen
 * Nami: Luffy ask him where the treasue is
 * Zoro: Oi Nami you could atleast help
 * Nami: we figured you three would be enough for 10 ships
 * pirate; I thought we could take them and become famous before reaching pirate paradise but we were wrong
 * Robin: you dont mean
 * pirate: Yea pirate Bay thats the island where the log is pointing
 * Luffy: Robin what is this Pirate Bay
 * Robin: It recently started to appear in the news papers appearantly its an island that only pirates set foot on and is run by the veteran pirate tortuga
 * Franky: (super pose) ow Ive heard of this tortuga appearantly he sells top notch weapons to pirates and is nothing but bad news
 * Chopper: Really!!
 * Usopp: A pirate island ssss..sounds Scary
 * Brook: I feel a new single comming on and its name will be PIRATE ISLAND
 * Luffy: sounds fun


 * PIRATE BAY ( a desert island with giant lizards running around)
 * A big gut indian looking man with a turban on his head and a thick black beard and a cigar in his mouth
 * info box: Tortuga the white turban bounty 450 million berrys
 * Tortuga: you are good Mr.Crocodile but why did you come to this desert island and help me expand my turf and even help me to fend off the marines i cant believe its just for the weapons
 * Crocodile: Really I happen to love desert islands like this and i need high class weapons but only the marines have them but when i team up with you we both win right Mr.1
 * Daz bones: right Boss
 * Toetuga: A very quiet an dangerous looking subordinate you have there how much do you pay him
 * Crocodile: Mr.1 collects his cash off his on whim i dont pay him at all any way i will be taking my leave
 * Daz: hmm you fooled him huh
 * Crocodile: what do you mean i do need the weapons but i did use him to keep the marines from noticing my movements and who knows he might even hold off that damn straw hat for a while
 * Daz: Right this time we dont want anyone messing with our plans but you know Tortuga will die or atleast get locked up
 * Crocodile: If that happens its his fault for being such an idiot on these seas any ways we better set sail before the commotion starts
 * Daz: right

so what do you guys think should i conytinue or should i just stop