User blog comment:Nobody700/Chapter 705 prediction./@comment-1595565-20130407185515

Not bad, a little too much character development for my taste, and you lost points with me for giving into one of your fanboy desires with Bartolomeo. You also made the pages pretty short. Some of them had to be, i understand, but most of them could have been longer. Above all it felt rather anticlamactic, which people aren't looking for in fights. Not terrible for your first try, though. I give it 6.5/10.