User blog comment:Hawkinz340/The Story of Edward: Intro/@comment-4754162-20130725022737

Boo! Fail! You did not mention Al, and the alchemy, and the transmutation circle, and how they want to resurrect their mom, and how they g- ...

Random person: Oi. That is a different Edward ok... Gosh, ji-chan nowadays...

Oh, sorry about that. Let's restart again! ... ... ... BTW, how is this Edward of ZooZoori related to WhiteBeard? Some nephew of his?

Another random: Edward IS WhiteBeard! Edward Newgate, hello?

Wait! What? Edward is WhiteBeard? Then who is Alphonse? Marco?

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OK, on a serious note, I hope there are a bit to this than just that. Otherwise the story is kinda hanging. Coming up with a background story for the characters will be nice, but you need to get it connected to somewhere in the canon series before you can call it (your character's background story) an end.