User blog comment:Besty17/A Tale Between Rivals’. Part 1/@comment-4754162-20120802090459

This part is interesting as it indirectly introduced a new character (the pirate hunter) and I like it. But towards the end (Zoro's part) the paragraphs got messed up and its kinda difficult and tiring trying to keep up. Have it as per the earlier half and the whole reading experience is that much nicer...