User blog comment:Djoletz/Chapter 670 Review/@comment-3291800-20120606120541

Its ok for your first review DJ, but you really need to make some changes.

First of all, some personal opinions for different parts or events from the chapter.

Secondly, add some humor, maybe some pictures and write something funny or random on them.

I am not very good at reviews, but I hope the things I said will help you improve a bit.You can also read other reviews and inspire yourself from there.