User blog comment:WonderfulUnicorn/Revolutionary War: Part 1/@comment-4754162-20130315092319/@comment-5896530-20130315122453

Thanks for the long feedback AY, it's always really appreciated to hear your opinion.

As for Mihawk, I can't really say anything else than what I've already said below, sorry... Though I'll be sure to keep it in mind and try to make him more "in his character" for the next parts to come.

As for Daz Bones, I can promise that there is some ulterior motives behind it all. I can also promise that he has improved quite a lot, and does now deserve his spot his spot as a Shichibukai.

As for the chaos between the Shichibukai resulted by bad leadership from the Marines part, is because all the Admirals were off on duties, and Akainu were preparing for the war.

As for Kuma, you will soon seem that the "Revolutionaries" preparing for a war against the Marines have done several things to the Pacifista we knew, and made him more and more "human-like" if I can say it that way.

About the Marines and Shichibukai realitonship, I think that you're just right about what you say! I just didn't kind of feel the need for Momonga to say that Akainu would report what he was going to tell him to the Gorosei and Kong.

Ohama is kind of gay-inspired, that's all XD

Thanks for liking how I did Buggy by the way!

As for the resemblence with DSP's blog, I tried to avoid that, but I guess a Shichibukai meeting will be kind of similar anyway. Hope you enjoyed it though! For the Revolutionary  Army, I have kind of planned out all of the Commanders, and I can say as much as it being 13 Commanders, everyone of them being new characters of course (expect Ivankov of course). For the actual War, I have planned out some pairings and stuff, but that's all for now. Next part should be up in about a week, so look out for it if you want to see more. Look out for the admiral"S" by the way XD