User talk:Wynia

Welcome Wynia


Vocabulary
Hello, I've noticed recently that you've been adding a lot of difficult words to articles recently. While these words make the wikia a more colorful read, I find that they make the wikia actually more difficult to read, and they don't really fit an encyclopedic writing style. Encyclopedic writing requires that words and grammar used are easy to understand for everyone. That is especially true for this wiki, which is read by many people for whom English is a second language. I find that while many of the words you used are still correct, some are not really necessary to change, and the changes make the article harder to understand. Some examples from your changes to the Shichibukai article are words such as: Dominion, debacle, syndicate, overture, progeny, and machination (which I actually had to look up, even being a native English speaker). While most of your edits are still perfectly fine, I just kindly request that you ask yourself to make sure that the words you use aren't overly complicated. Thank you. 04:56, September 9, 2012 (UTC)

A couple more example from your recent edits to Portgas D. Ace: Obstinacy, tribulation. And from Kuma: inveigle, agency (in the context you used it in), echelons, progeny, etc. 00:09, September 10, 2012 (UTC)