User blog comment:Alois-pyon/The Child of a Clown (Pt. 1)/@comment-3986064-20120603150341/@comment-3986064-20120604070927

As a story development, it was a little rushed, basically, it felt like the slime was already there, whilst it was still far away, seen in the distance, like a freaking tsunami of toxins. You could have waited a little bit till it would be seen first, then present us the shocked faces of the 3 SH a little more. Presenting the movement of the slime would have been boring, so yeah, that'd be a bad suggestion.

At the comic, (not bad face) it was really good. Especially Sanji's nosebleed XD that was too awesome!!

I was slightly wondering if, considering the the latest chapters, Brook would really make so many skull jokes, although I would truly love to see him do so many. Hell it was awesome to hear so many of them since I laugh at most of them anyway!

So I loved your humor!

But the ending was way too dramatic, it was not a good way to create a One Piece chapter end cliffhanger. I would have recommended a short return to the action of Luffy and the rest. Then in the next chapter he'd troll us and return to this fight of our 4 frozen idiots. Cutting legs was seen before once, as a joke of course XD.

Either way, after so much adventure, these idiots are stronger than that, if Luffy could survive all of Magellan's poisons, imagine these 2, ofc Nami's body is more fragile, but their willpower is strong