User blog comment:Ranger94/The void century and the lost kingdom part 5/@comment-8823907-20130527122504/@comment-5962458-20130527142903

some dialog would be nice indeed.we need to start destinguishing all those characters and their powers and roles in the story, so the way they speak interact and interfere personaly on the plot would be a big help on that.

As always a fun read. keep going amigo