User blog comment:Ranger94/The void century and the lost kingdom part 5/@comment-8823907-20130527122504

Thanks Briscombe and MDM also anyone else who read it and liked it i would also like to ask a question while writing the next parts thre was a big section which is hard to be said like a lob (as it was so far) i am thinking of combinig it with sort of a memory dialogy where joy says i remember everything and goes into some sort of a dream section where he doesnt describe the situation but  remembers the dialog ane everything line by line it will be better for the dynamic of the story ahead. I just like to ask if you guys think that that is wrong and i should try it from a different angle or that you could be ok with that ?