User blog comment:DancePowderer/Views from the Top/@comment-5962458-20130702113920

Mancha is the blond one right?

Very nice story! I liked the difference in the power level it should be close to the truth.And DD being the son of a Gorosei makes some sence i guess.I only have one objection though, i think you should work more on Kizaru's manner of speaking, it seemed too serious and you didn't use the way he usually phrases like ending with question or often using the word scary.Apart from that it was entertaining.Plus you use a cliffhanger on a random story and it actually worked! Now i want to see what he wants with them. Impressive!