User blog comment:WonderfulUnicorn/Revolutionary War: Part 1/@comment-4754162-20130315092319

Ok, quite good. My views below:

- Mihawk is really out-of-character (if you consider canon as benchmark). Despite you may intend of him to be in bad mood but in my opinion his character will be a quiet person, even more so if he is in bad mood. Definitely not a person easily agitated and lose cool easily.

- Can't see how Daz Bones can fit into the Shichibukai post neither has the ultimate technique as Mihawk's nor devastating DF like those of other fellow Shichibukais or even influence like those of Buggy's. Unless you have something under your sleeves about this fellow (to be revealed in later chapters), I don't think I can comment much about this

- I like the concept of all those egos in a bag, chaotic is almost certain a situation in the meeting there but the one to qwell this chaos should be no lower than fleet admiral rank of the marines. I don't think the shichibukais answers to the marines but a fleet admiral should be a powerfully respected member worthy of at least some obedience from the nine at the very least

- this is my personal view, Kuma being a fully modified cyborg, should behave more like a machine without even a bit of human personality left in him. Therefore, my interpretation of Kuma is more like those of his copy (Pacifista), barely interact with other humans but just yes or no or the last statement that you used there (is logical). But to be saying "I'm all ears" is so humane. Again this is just my opinion, you don't have to consider it at all.

- I get you saying below that the meeting is more of a test of sorts, but overall it feels to me as if the Shichibukais are under the Marines, which I felt a bit out of place because I think they answer directly to WG. More like accomplice of sorts is the relationship between Marines and Shichibukai

- Lol! IDK, Ohama asking Kuma is so... gay

- Always amusing is Buggy the clown. The way you do him is good.

- Lastly, one thing that is against your favor, DSP has just made a quite similar concept blog of a Shichibukai meeting not long ago and I can draw some of similarities between yours and his. I admit I am a bit biased by his because he kinda "owned" the originality of such blog already. But I am curious how you will depict the Revo army, because its pretty much everybody's guess. You may be aware that Soul has his version of the Revo army, so I'm interested to see how you do your version of it.

Whoa, pretty lengthy reply there. Sorry for the lot of words, I tend to get carried away sometimes.