Talk:Luffy's Forms

Questions
I understand the purpose of this and I really don't want to be horrible criticizer but I really have some things to say about this. Please see my points.

First, shouldn't this article started out first as a long article inside of a list linking to several articles. Obviously, Luffy's gonna need more than one article to tackle his various forms however shouldn't they have all been grouped together first to see if it would produce a good page. I mean it would be like making seven Rokushiki pages. Six to house each style and one to link them all. By the way, can being strapped to a wax candle or a golden ball against one's will be considered a form?

Second, it's placement in the template means that it can easily seen and all but is it well categorized. The tittle and some of it's sentences don't seem to suggest an article about a fighting style like Santouryu beside it, at least to me. I mean would making an article called Doc Q's medicines suggest an article about a fighting style or a article suggesting weapons.

Third, was the article about Luffy's Devil Fruit read properly from top to bottom? I think it's somewhat clear at the bottom of that page where to put attacks and such. The three Devil Fruit links at the top of the ability section of the Straw Hat template kinda suggest something. If those are ignored, I think we might end up with eleven links in the ability section when there's only eight main characters. Sigh...Mugiwara Franky 01:02, 29 December 2006 (UTC)