User blog comment:Blackendedsoul/Final War Prediction - Part Nine/@comment-4754162-20120204143303

Soul, Today I have purposely allocated roughly 1~2 hrs to catch up with your story and thus I read Part 3-9 straight up nonstop. I got a bit to say so here goes: 1) Please know that you have a very good thing going on here, its a master(one)piece if I am to describe it. A good (warring) storyline, a nicely done presentation (in similar fashion of the original OP), fan fic which is as good as BLS' chapter predictions, good creativity on the DFs (I especially like the color color no mi, or was it paint paint no mi?), characters (with the many complimenting comments about it in the past, need I say more?), plot and power level (a clear difference in the astonishing powers of Marco vs the "legendary" powers of Gorosei). This pushes the boundary even further! You should be very proud of what you did here. I am rather surprised that you have little comments but I can understand that not many has the patience to endure such a long blog. I admit in having the exact lazyness when starting with your earlier work (at shipoffools) but after like 10-15 mins into it I find myself hard to stop reading (I even postponed an urge for the loo for 1.5 hours!). Great work and keep it up! 2) After reading each part, I will take a look at the comments that people gave and in the midst, I found some spoilers (people asked, you either hinted quite obviously or spoke out bluntly) for future chapters which is quite a giveaway. Your storyline grow in me (like an original OP itself) and seeing the spoiler makes me a bit unhappy. While its tempting to respond a a little to reader's request, please know that its actually the anticipation which makes waiting for the new parts interesting and worthwhile. Thus if possible, could you try to keep the lid on your story as tight as possible? 3) After reading your works, I have discovered that I have a DF power in me, which I have absolutely no idea when I ate it! The fruit I took was the SUGE SUGE NO MI, a paramecian DF which makes the user constantly saying SUGEEEE!!! Yup, this is what blurt out from my mouth as I read your chapters, every 5 mins or so I will go SUGE!... SUUGEE!!!... SUUUUGEEEEEE!!!! ^_^ ''* Imagine seeing a guy looking into the monitor screen and go SUGE! SUGE! SUGE! every few mins or so, either this person is hentai or crazy *'' 4) Noticed that you were feeling down as some of your comments could be read as sarcastic. Please cheer up, if you need a good laugh, do check out some of MDM-sama's recent blogs, his quarrels with the other seniors (especially Neo-san) is really hilarious when read in neutral light (well, at least it is to me). Hope you feel better soon! Sorry for the lengthy comment, this is AY pen'ing off...