User blog comment:XJellyBean/One Piece AMV :)/@comment-192.197.54.23-20110308004007

Lacks focus it just seems like you choose a bunch of random clips and threw them together most of the time whats happening in the clips doesnt match the tempo of the song

however it is good that you had the clips flowing the speed of the song even if whats happening in them doesn't really flow all that well. With a bit more practice and more keen eye you could do something pritty decent. I recomend next time using a song that isn't so fast as it forces you to have to keep up and forcing your movie to lose focus as everything comes and goes before you get to appreciate the clip all that much.

not bad tho 5/10