User blog comment:Blackendedsoul/Final War Prediction - Part Twelve/@comment-4699129-20120321013958/@comment-4699129-20120321015920

Not me, I like the building up of a story. I just wish that the change in scenes was a bit more defined. i.e.- When you change over from a scene with Rudolph over to one with Shanks, I thought there should have been something else besides a space between paragraphs to signal change of scenes. But that is just my opinion. (Sorry to ramble)