User blog comment:LuffyPirateKing/Chapter 612 prediction/@comment-3242083-20110125161544

I'm not as generous as the people below, mainly because I have to compare it to Blackleg's and Yountoryu's predictions (even if it is your first time).

That said, I give it a good 5/10, mainly because you have to get into detail a lot more. Describe the characters expressions and feelings, lead us to the one piece world we know and add your own flavor to it! The former is already done well (too well), the latter is next to non-existent. While it is always a save bet to keep the characters reactions close to what we have seen so far, it is also a bit redundant and boring.

Your own "fresh meat" could come in form of a new character (I was hoping for the princess there), or an yet unseen feature of one of the Straw Hats (in another blog you made a great start, picturing Franky with some fishman-children pressing random buttons on his body), or Robin wandering through the royal library - unveiling more information about fishman islands past (fisher tiger etc).

A great example of what I'm talking about is one of blacklegs predictions, where he created his very own fishman (it was a shrimp fishman with antennas resembling a chinese mustache, like Jyaburas). That fishman was completely made up, but authentic enough to fit into the one piece world. The moment you make your audience picture something, you have won.

Still, all in all, good work on your first prediction. I'm sure we will see more of you and I'm already looking forward to it.