User talk:Sawa 13

Re: Luffy's history section
It doesn't help your argument that you're not lazy when you just copy and paste something you wrote before. While some of your edits were good, some of ST's were as well, which means that you should edit just yours in instead of undoing his. It's only common sense. 11:17, November 12, 2013 (UTC)

Re: reword
"After the group cut up and ate..."

"...Luffy meets a centaur, whom he fights..."

"Ceasar..." (typo)

ahich--->which (typo)

gatheres---> gathers (typo)

informes---> informs (typo)

"...the paper mentions..."

"Lawtells..." (needs a space)

Bolds are for the correct words. Those are some of your mistakes. Correct them all and, as I said, reword instead of reverting. Cheers

Yes I can agree with the typos, my bad I didn't catch them all. But the first one was intentional, If you look at the page it mixes past and present tenses horribly, I was using the present tense intentionally, to streamline the whole thing. I decided on the present, first because it reads better, and secondly because there was more of it in the first place.Sawa 13 (talk) 11:32, November 12, 2013 (UTC)

All history articles must be in the past tense. Wiki rules. 11:39, November 12, 2013 (UTC)

Look at the article, its full of present tense. Besides I looked at the rules there is no rule like the one you point out above. Can you link, then I will admit a mistake and rewrite my edit into past tense.

Sawa 13 (talk) 11:48, November 12, 2013 (UTC)

his reply should be on my talk page. I write on yours you write on mine, that's how it works. Also, what Nova said. And some advice, use source mode when editing, so you can see your typos. You can always try and edit the article again, having in mind what we talked about. Do not get discouraged in any way, just because one edit got reverted, it happens to the best of us :)

http://onepiece.wikia.com/wiki/One_Piece_Encyclopedia:Guidebook/Manual_of_Style#Grammar Article about the past means article needs to be in past tense. 11:52, November 12, 2013 (UTC)

Read the rule carefully, it states clearly that only flashbacks are to be described using the past tense. everything else should be written in present.Sawa 13 (talk) 11:57, November 12, 2013 (UTC)

I don't think you were the one who read it carefully. SeaTerror (talk) 19:23, November 12, 2013 (UTC)