User blog comment:DancePowderer/Crashing Down Around Him/@comment-5962458-20131123094901

I really liked how you avoided the fighting and focused on the mental breakdown. I, too, think that in order to defeat this guy, one needs to shatter his arrogance first.

Plot was very well constructed and roles were assigned properly. The only thing that could be better for me was the dialogues, so that they can match exactly the way the characters really express themselves. Though I guess that's alright since this is fan fiction more than a typical prediction.

Overall, a highly entertaining blog. Good job!