User blog comment:DarkSkullPirates/Basil Hawkins vs Crocodile/@comment-3425840-20120331225801

The battle itself seems okay but there were some faults, Hawkins does not make voodoo dolls during battle, he has to have them from before. Also when Hawkins landed on a pond, the fight was actually over as he being a devil fruit user would have been rendered incapacitated in water. Also why did not Daz Bones try to aid Crocodile? He could not have been dealt with by just a pubch.

Sorry if I am acting like a bitch but you did ask for constructive criticism.