User blog comment:XdrakeYONKO/chapter 706 predicton (XDY)/@comment-1595565-20130414095549

First off, you made the pages waaaaaay too short. You could have added in a lot more activity. Oda draws maybe one panoramic scene per chapter, maybe two. You had like seven. That's the main problem I have with this. The second problem I have is more a minor yet major detail. You completely forgot about the guy rummaging around inside the men's quarters on the Sunny. It was pretty good, but you can add a lot more than what you have. 6/10.