User blog comment:AYET/Raftel Arc : Act 2 - The Women and The Lion of Nemea/@comment-3425840-20140218003430

Umm to be honest, the story itself is a good read but the scenes could have been bit more detailed than just being stated.

Also it does not go with the flow of OP that much. I mean the plot.

Still overall not bad, 7/10.