User blog comment:DarkSkullPirates/Yonko War Part 5/@comment-4754162-20130719014146

GASP! DSP, your Apoo... how could you...?

The intensity of the story is getting higher and higher, better and better. But if you can, please give some attention to the minor typo errors, they marred the enjoyment of the story quite a bit.

Also, I think your story is going to be a big one, involving a lot of locations within the island. Are you able to doodle up a map of the island and point out the locations of the scenes, similar to how we see maps during FI arc, PH arc, etc? That would be a great supplement to the story