User blog comment:Kaido King of the Beasts/Chapter 766 Prediction: The Heart of the Matter/@comment-62.183.86.244-20141029120054

Nice written. But there are some things I don't like. Like you had Doflamingo say No! NOOOOO! and that was out of character. I think he would have said something more like Damn it!! And also you forgot the Birdcage and Law's trauma and the Marines ambush.