User blog comment:Hawkinz340/Chapter 717...... I don't know what to think/@comment-4754162-20130807114247

I don't mean to offend you but just wish to let you know that you are preaching straight from the chapter, to which we could have read it on our own.

By just doing that, the whole blog feels kinda bland, unless your aim for the blog to be a synopsis rather than a review.

Try adding more of what your thoughts about each sections in order to make it a more interesting read, and less of directly stating the obvious from the chapter.

Hope you don't get hurt by this, and hope to see your attempts getting better next time