User blog comment:Monkey D. Madness/My first prediction./@comment-3986064-20110829230708

I can't say harsh things, but you got two things wrong, first of all, they seemed like the crew before the time-skip, that's something anyone who is new would do, I did the same mistake and I still think that I don't fully understand the TS characters and second of all, OP is a series where everything lasts longer, even if it gets tiring and boring, you need to get a dialogue longer and add more feelings to it, since I can say that it didn't feel like it had any powerful feelings in it, other than that it was a pretty good job for your first one