User blog comment:DancePowderer/How the So-Called Paradise Will Fall/@comment-8823907-20130621201016

First of all great job. Realy creepy loved it. Secondly i would like to ask is this a story you set in the universe of one piece or a prediction ?

Oh and i like it there is just one thing if you care for feedback that the lines of luufy and zoro dont realy sound like thing that luffy and zoro wold say.