User blog comment:Ranger94/The void century and the lost kingdom part 2/@comment-5962458-20130514093827/@comment-8823907-20130514130120

Well those are all good points i will try to work on them. I cant realy explain a few things right niw because they will spoil the ending.

Also concerning the idea about the king having conquerors haki i now it is just too clishe but i thought about and i thought about it and it just seemed reasonbale that if i have a country where the DF are grown the same country will probably have a means on how to fight them. Also I though about why the 20 king would form an aliance against the ancient kingdom and if the ancient kingdom had the 3 greatest wepons ever created why did they loose the fight ? I incorporated these qurestions into my story. There is a specific reason why the king had to have the fire fruit and none of the other fruits but again it would spoil the surprise. Ther is an important reason why i gave the prince the gum gum fruit ability and also why the implication of him having it and eating it by accident :D. I know how this sounds its like i have no idea what i am talking about and just trying to make excuses but i think that what makes a good story is when you make such a plot twist that noone expects or that some minor detail will play an enormous role.

The thing about the sea king i hadnt realy thought about but  I will try to do better next time :)