User blog comment:Nobody700/Justice of the red dog: Part 2/@comment-24148870-20140129044732

I think it would have been better if you have shown the first killing instead. A personality /habit/ decision has a progression and beating people is a far cry from killing.

And if you are doing this mini-stories thingy to be a better writer, then properly writing first time experience would have served you better.

Just a thought...

And another thing, interjecting a new character(s) no one cares about does not help you, your characters, your story or the readers in anyway. If you can't help the readers feel anything on a new character, you could have used the writing space for the old characters to reflect on things, practice or get stronger emotionally, physically and / or mentally.