User blog comment:Marcus Junior/BW: Poisonous black/@comment-3507136-20120607213358

This was something I was looking forward to seeing, Like the Jinbe vs Ace prediction that Rici had made, it was a great match-up that I believe many would have loved to see on an episode or chapter of one piece! Other than the few spelling mistakes it was a pleasure to read, both Magellan and Teach were both genuinely portrayed well. However, the alternate dimension and magma as Dp pointed out below drove it a little too far for me but nonetheless it was a great read. I would have loved for it to be longer but hey, thats just me hehe.

I rate this a 9/10. To have achieved a perfect 10 for me would have ment that you should have pointed out the criminals that Teach had released and maybe added a little more dialogue (if possible). And thinking up a better way of ending things than with magma and alternate dimensions. Nonetheless I rate it 9 out of 10.