User blog comment:Ranger94/The void century and the lost kingdom/@comment-1595565-20130512001757/@comment-8823907-20130512085042

Well i new that it wouldnt be awsome this first part. It is probably no surprise to me that other may have had the same ideas as i did but i didnt read theirs. I am sorry to hear that youd didnt like anything so far DP but still i would like you to read ther rest aswell. This was suposed to be just the prolog. As you saw basiacly i just divided the DF in this part of the story. Named the kingdom and some character. The second part is a little shorter and again it explains a little about what i think the lost kingdom was about. Yesterday i wrote the third part and it is a little more dynamic than the first two. I understand that at this point I am just a rookie and this is my first try to write a storyso i ask you to be patinet and i will try to impress you later on :)