User blog comment:Nobody700/Chapter 756 Prediction/@comment-1595565-20140731054227

Pretty good. Nice twist on some of the officers' backstories. I liked the part with Bellamy and how you put a limit on Doflamingo's power. I saw the flashback with Sai as unnecessary. Interesting ending, though I would have expanded slightly on how Momo is the Shogun's son and not Kin'emon's, despite multiple statements (including Momo's) to the contrary. My only word of advice to you is to proofread your work or have someone do it for you before publishing.