User talk:Doctursea

Gin edit
The way the sentence reads right now, it flows a bit better, I guess you could say. It doesn't read as confusing to me right now as it is written, but then again maybe you are seeing something I overlooked. In any case, I think it best if we just leave it as it is, unless there is some large error, in which case change it as you see fit. Thanks for your concern, though. It is much appreciated, and needed! Sorry in advance for the red link sig thingie, I need to work on fixing that! XD 05:34, February 9, 2014 (UTC)

If looked it up and the reason it doesn't read correctly is that's it's not proper grammar. The was the sentence is set up now the commas are not used correctly, The sentence would mean "After Krieg is defeated by Luffy which brings Gin to tears" The sentence needed to be edited to be read properly. Sorry for being abupt about it.. Doctursea (talk) 05:38, February 9, 2014 (UTC)