User blog comment:Vazelos3/Chapter 718 prediction/@comment-1595565-20130815013108

Not bad. You had some interesting bits. I would have only two minor complaints. First is you made it a little too short (my last few have been on the shorter side, so I'm not much one to talk). You could have squeaked in another page or two. Secondly, to me at least, you're moving a little too fast. Take your time to move through each story. I felt like you were trying to pack in too much. One content note; people love fights, so I either A. would have extended Zoro's and Bastille's scuffle, if only slightly, or B. showed the finish to Luffy and Chinjao's fight, and not just skipped to the end. You gotta give the people what they want. My one true qualm is with the very end, namely the killing implement with which Bellamy was charged. I think the reason we haven't seen seastone bullets in the series is because they are too unfair. They don't give the df user a chance, and so are omitted. I also don't think a gun would be Bellamy's preferred weapon of choice. I see him as more of a knife guy. Overall, pretty good for your first time. I'd say 7.8/10.