User blog comment:DarkSkullPirates/A Final Farewell/@comment-4754162-20120619052253

YOHOHOHO!!! DSP-kun, so sorry for the late comment. Office works - of late - has been killing me literally, though I'm already dead! YOHOHOHO! SKULL JOKU!!!

That was one shitty good writing there!! I can really feel the emotion, the gloomy environment and everyone's feelings at the funeral. My (Brook's) hats off to you, an amazing piece of literature! You have some talent in writing there, am envious that you are blessed with two good stuffs in you (photoshop & writing).

Now, about the story:


 * Where's grampa Garp??? Don't tell me he's dead already?


 * I like what you did with the bounty poster running gag there.


 * Luffy's coffin came with Hancock... are you trying to imply "Luffy X Hancock" here???


 * "Brook later told me he wasnt even invited" Do you meant Brook told Sanji (me) that Crocodile (he) was not even invited (but came to attend the funeral anyway), or are you trying to make a gag about Brook being dead hence no one invited the dead (the "he" = Brook) over for a funeral? Which is correct, or are they both wrong?


 * Coby attended whilst in disguise - I like this! And Smoker too, though hiding in some tree...


 * Placing the straw hat with Luffy, in the coffin, means the legacy of the straw hat has ended, should mean the world has achieved one piece... I mean one peace. Its a nice way to end the manga...


 * The crew carved their names on his coffin, yet another thing I find one of those things they did with great respect, instead of being seen as an act of rudeness

KEEP IT UP, DSP!