Template talk:Cleanup

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I can't fix everything at the moment, like on Luffy's page so I made this in hopes that others may know that something is wrong and do something to help out.Mugiwara Franky 17:04, 20 July 2008 (UTC)

Hi. :) Just wondering - are you looking for shorter summaries on his page, or just to take out irrelevant details? I read the whole discussion on Luffy's talk, but I don't want to accidentally change anything I don't need to when helping. Sephirona 18:58, 20 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Shorter summaries would be okay I guess, as long as a journey, for example, from Point A to Point D doesn't miss out Point B and C. The real problem would be the parts in the character's history sections that have become like retelling entire arcs instead of focusing on the characters. It's okay to state other things in arc sections as long as it correlates to the character being talked about. It's when things stop putting the character in focus. For example in Sabaody, Usopp didn't journey with the landing party to find the mechanic. His history section about his involvement in Sabaody shouldn't involve things that he neither was apart of nor experienced. An explanation of why he was looking for Camie with the Flying Fish Riders is okay, but a paragraph of Shakky explaining things to Luffy and not Usopp shouldn't be.Mugiwara Franky 14:50, 22 July 2008 (UTC)