User blog comment:Alois-pyon/The Child of a Clown (Pt. 1)/@comment-3986064-20120603150341

Rizza, it was simply beautiful, amazing is a great word fitting for this work you created. But I still have a problem, it lacks enough dialogue lines. One Piece contains a huge amount of dialogue lines. You should really work on that. (sorry for being so late with my response and that my criticism is so damn small, I will make a longer one later, but I hope that for now it's enough to show I read the prediction).