User blog comment:Imhungry4444/Revolutionary war Part 7/@comment-3986064-20110521095145

There's one last thing I have to say You made a mistake a about Dragon's character, first he must already have haki, haoshoku haki too, second he could've heard the voices disappearing before, not just now and he still started a war realizing that, he was in so many battles before and conquered so many kingdoms, I believe he never gave up for something like that, and if he suddenly changes his mind like this.... It would've been better if he'd just come here alone and destroy everything b himself, also if he had the power to defeat Kong, Kong being at least 2 times stronger than Akainu, than he could've just defeated Akainu first and than take care of the rest of the problems, after so many losses he wouldn't just run away, until he saw a great disadvantage and possible way to lose the war, he would be very smart, unlike Luffy or Garp, he should've been able to think of many possibilities to win or lose while fighting great foes, he's the legendary Dragon, that is what I didn't like What I liked is how you made everyone fight with their equals or just bit inferior/superior, also I loved very much the attacks and devil fruits, but you could've give Dragon Kaze No Ryu(dragon of the wind) It was ok and epic too, just some details gone wrong