You missed the targetEdit
Character histories need only contain THAT characters history and involvements with the storyline. So Luffy's role in the storyline should only be on his page. We have Chapters for the whole stories. Also, some things like noted Ballemy's fight in the bar with Luffy and Zoro mimicking Shanks' fight in the bar are better off as trivia notes instead of actaul story.
One more thing... Good as it is to add a lot of text, references make a page: Referencing Information. You should always add refs to a page. Please take these things in mind in future when editing, you can save yourself and others a lot of time if you get things correct in the first place. Also, you can sandbox any tests you feel you need to carry out and practice good editing.
This isn't a telling off, its more of advice for the future and you've not done anything wrong at all, this is simply a rookie editor mistake. Feel free to continue editng, but please keep in mind these little things. One-Winged Hawk 00:39, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
Are you Coldhandzz? Edit
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